We have been writing adverts full of persuasive techniques!
May need a bit of perfecting but I think Year 4 have made some very persuasive adverts! Might you hear this on Metro Radio?
CommentsAmy 06/12/2013 5:46pm
It was fun and funny when we heard it Mr Temple (Tanfield Lea) 09/12/2013 9:19pm
Great advert writing. I liked the musical jingles to begin the advert and was impressed with the word 'gargantuan' in one. Well done, Year 4! Owen 09/12/2013 9:32pm
That looks neat Mr Parker 12/12/2013 1:50pm
Thank you very much Mr Temple.Year 4 are becoming experts at persuasive writing! Isabelle sharman 12/12/2013 5:02pm
Awesome radio adverts I want to go there now! chynna {Tanfield lea} 05/02/2014 5:30pm
I am in year 4 as well all of us can't wait to see you all. but very good radio stuff :] Brian Jessop 12/03/2014 10:14am
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