We have been writing adverts full of persuasive techniques!
May need a bit of perfecting but I think Year 4 have made some very persuasive adverts! Might you hear this on Metro Radio?
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Amy
06/12/2013 5:46pm
It was fun and funny when we heard it
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Mr Temple (Tanfield Lea)
09/12/2013 9:19pm
Great advert writing. I liked the musical jingles to begin the advert and was impressed with the word 'gargantuan' in one. Well done, Year 4!
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Owen
09/12/2013 9:32pm
That looks neat
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Mr Parker
12/12/2013 1:50pm
Thank you very much Mr Temple.Year 4 are becoming experts at persuasive writing!
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Isabelle sharman
12/12/2013 5:02pm
Awesome radio adverts I want to go there now!
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chynna {Tanfield lea}
05/02/2014 5:30pm
I am in year 4 as well all of us can't wait to see you all. but very good radio stuff :]
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Brian Jessop
12/03/2014 10:14am
The radio adverts are really good
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