We have been writing adverts full of persuasive techniques!
May need a bit of perfecting but I think Year 4 have made some very persuasive adverts! Might you hear this on Metro Radio?
Amy
6/12/2013 01:46:06 am
It was fun and funny when we heard it
Mr Temple (Tanfield Lea)
9/12/2013 05:19:43 am
Great advert writing. I liked the musical jingles to begin the advert and was impressed with the word 'gargantuan' in one. Well done, Year 4!
Owen
9/12/2013 05:32:23 am
That looks neat
Mr Parker
11/12/2013 09:50:18 pm
Thank you very much Mr Temple.Year 4 are becoming experts at persuasive writing!
Isabelle sharman
12/12/2013 01:02:41 am
Awesome radio adverts I want to go there now!
chynna {Tanfield lea}
5/2/2014 01:30:37 am
I am in year 4 as well all of us can't wait to see you all. but very good radio stuff :]
Brian Jessop
11/3/2014 07:14:11 pm
The radio adverts are really good Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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