Your challenge today Year 4 is to describe this event as creatively as possible in 100 words or less. Good luck! If you finish have a go at describing the amazing images you see taken by the Hubble space telescope:
65 billion years ago dinosaurs roamed the earth terrorising everything but that was all about to change when a asteroid hit earth .....
The hit was amazing,gargantuan!! It was also as wide as the sea! As it was falling it looked like a beautiful,explosive firework!! Also it looked like a drop of water dropping into a puddle!
This is what experts think happened to dinosaurs and also why you only see them in pictures books or films.
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Amy
31/3/2014 11:43:56 pm
Suddenly, I saw a very bright asteroid when I was driving in my car.The asteroid was as bright as the sun.Holding my breath,I was so amazed and very horrified because it was something I have never seen before.Without warning,it hurtled towards the surface of the Earths crust rapidly.The glimmering asteroid hit a very hard mountain and some rocks came falling down and hit lots and lots of cars.Lots of people got took to the hospital because of the asteroid...The asteroid was so fast you couldn't even know where it was going.Also it created a gargantuan BANG!
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Kerys
1/4/2014 12:00:15 am
Cool Amy you did well
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Ebony
1/4/2014 12:00:54 am
Very good you could use metaphors.
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Lewis
1/4/2014 12:01:07 am
Great job Amy. Could you include more adjectives?
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Katie
1/4/2014 12:02:24 am
I thought you used everything Mr Parker told you to do.
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Lewis
31/3/2014 11:48:23 pm
Rapidly, the collosal,speedy asteroid hit the atmosphere at 2260 miles per hour as fast as 200 cheetahs combined.The asteroid went swooping gentley trough the atmosphere which was a firework.The asteroid was shining and glistening with brightness.also the asteroid made a huge explosion as gargantuan as empty land...
Just a few minutes later millions and billions of humans died of the asteroid shockwave and asteroid impact very very few survived such as me I am very lucky to survive.
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Brian
1/4/2014 12:00:52 am
Well done
Could you add a simile
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Amy
1/4/2014 12:01:27 am
Wow awesome description but could you add some similes
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jason
3/4/2014 10:43:00 pm
well done lewis you have add loads of adjectives I want to read more.
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Cody
31/3/2014 11:57:24 pm
Suddenly, I was just walking until I saw a really giant ,bright light so I followed it, it was as loud as a volcano arupting ,but it was really fast , faster than a cheater racing. So I finally court up to it and it crashed in a flash . I bet even America could hear it, it was really Loud. It finally exploded
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Danielle
1/4/2014 12:01:20 am
Very good u have some good words in there
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Tymek P
1/4/2014 09:26:01 pm
Suddenly, a glittering, blinding light flew through the sky at an enormous speed. Just then the asteroid as dangerous as a fierce creature smashed destructively at our helpless atmosphere. To my amazement the demolishing rock hit Earths terrain promptly. Seconds after thousands of pieces of exploded like a red hot volcano erupting as a result it hit people kilometres away. As soon as the as ancient as a castle meteorite hit our planet all the emergency sounds went on, probably when the asteroid attacked Earth loudly, probably the whole country heard. The crater was as deep as the pacific ocean.
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Tamsin
1/4/2014 09:29:40 pm
Without warning, a massive rock came burning down in flames I was so surprised I got out the car and ran to take pictures but I lost my camera and it was heading towards me.. I jumped rapidly out the way and it obliterated buildings to get through.. It was not an ordinary rock as you can hear… it was as bright as the sun and as it was coming I heard bangs and people screaming far away.. The rock (as in asteroid) It sounded like a drum banging your ears and a girl screaming. That is all that happened.
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shanice
2/4/2014 01:24:56 am
Good description could you add adverbs and punctuation
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Ethan
3/4/2014 06:23:09 pm
When I was in my car I sow a bright light then I knew it was an asteroid! I could not believe my eyes it went rapidly over my car it had bursting flames it looked as hot as a bowl of curry suddenly. It hit the ground it caused a shock wave glass to shatter and gigantic buildings to fall to the solid ground. When it hit the ground my haring grenade was squeaking like a mouse. Also it exploded into little fragments. Furthermore, the cars where going off loudly it was very noisy out in the streets .
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jason
3/4/2014 10:40:15 pm
In 2013 an Meteorite hit Russia I was in a car approximately the Meteorite went 10000mph it went past my car like an rocket launcher. Without warning the Meteorite created a whirlwind which hit the windows and cars and sirens started to work . Without warning the meteorite shot faster then an typhoon but just a couple of 170mph. Despite all the warnings the impact was not the sound but the catastrophic event made a powerful BANG! The chaotic , bang went the meteorite luckily it hit an mountain.
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Bradley w
6/4/2014 12:45:20 am
Nice work
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Tymek
3/4/2014 10:40:41 pm
Suddenly, a glittering, blinding light flew through the sky at an enormous speed. Just then the asteroid as dangerous as a fierce creature smashed destructively at our helpless atmosphere. To my amazement the demolishing rock hit Earths terrain promptly. Seconds after thousands of pieces of exploded like a red hot volcano erupting as a result it hit people kilometres away. As soon as the as ancient as a castle meteorite hit our planet all the emergency sounds went on, probably when the asteroid attacked Earth loudly, probably the whole country heard. The crater was as deep as the pacific ocean.
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Leona
3/4/2014 10:40:50 pm
Suddenly, I saw a blinding light it appeared as a fast as a flash. Rapidly, a giant ball of rock approached earth’s surface. Without warning the destructive rock shattered the surface of the earth. Immediately, after the thunderous asteroid SHMASHD into the surface of the earth it also made a gargantuan BOOM! It sounded like a heard of angry, charging mammals (bulls).Even though the buildings where strong the asteroid made a catastrophic earth quake. As well as the shattering windows the tall buildings came crashing down quickly.
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kerys
3/4/2014 10:41:40 pm
A blazing light flashes though the sky and is crumbling into little particles. Leaving smokes lines and dust thou out the sky causing black clouds throughout the sky. It started getting scolding hot also heat waves started to appear as the asteroid set on fire and was burning up. By now this asteroid had crumbled in to millions of pieces and was hurdling to earth like a built out of a gun. Suddenly it crashed landed into the ground with a tremendous bang it skidded across earth’s crust. Flicking up ground and smashing up buildings and tearing down trees rapidly.
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Bradley
3/4/2014 10:41:53 pm
When I was in the car I saw a gargantuan Meteorite that shattered the glorious surface of the Earth. It was as light as the Sun. It spat lots of manicure, fiery Meteorite. Furthermore, it was as loud as a football crowd. Without warning, a blinding light appeared as quick as a lighting flash in the sky. I saw it land in Russia. It was as big as a erupting volcano also it was as flame as a massive fire in Buckraming palace. Suddenly it started to go up in flames. BANG! It exploded in to really really tiny bits.
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katie
3/4/2014 10:42:15 pm
was in my car when a colossal thing flew over my car and I could not believe my eyes and it hit the ground in 1 second it made a gargantuan explosion and all the concrete flew every were even people in the next street could hear and see it .balls of fire and gas and made smoke in the sky .everybody crowed around to see what had happened. Suddenly the asteroid exploded the fire shot every were shot every were luckily no one was hurt
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callum c
3/4/2014 10:42:25 pm
Thursday 3rd April
WAlT: 100 word challenge
Before any had a chance to move I saw an asteroid had impact Earth when it went to the crust of Earth. Its light can blind you like a lightning bolt it was outstanding! Its speed was 90000 mph. after the asteroid hit the grand we terrain [looking for stuffs] the pleas. Soon we fanned it. I did a test we were sure it is from the asteroid belt.
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cody
3/4/2014 10:42:36 pm
Suddenly, when I was walking in the park I saw a shiny, bright light .The shiny light was as bright as the sun I nearly got blinded .So I followed the light. I found out it was a space ship it crashed just in the forest near the park .BANG! The asteroid SMASHED all the trees and all the swing, slide, round- about ,bench, the climbing frame and the swig pole. The space ship was about 10 elephants long . When it landed my life flashed before my eyes.
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Brian Jessop
3/4/2014 10:43:01 pm
Suddenly, the asteroid came rushing through we saw the asteroid going as fast as light. The sound was as loud as a rocket Before anyone had a chance to run the asteroid hit us. We didn’t know we were about to see an asteroid. summer’s day the hottest on Earth ever we’ve had.. The Speed of the asteroid was as fast as a fast Ferrari . As the asteroid was rushing down it went through our atmosphere and burnt some atmosphere. Just when the asteroid hit us it was like a hot summers day ever weve had on Earth ever.
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callum a
3/4/2014 10:43:20 pm
Shooting though the sky was a scary meteoroid it was heading towards north it looked moody and light. It was shooting though the buildings like a rocket launcher. They blew up KFC. We could see it coming to the surface it was burning like a boiling hot volcano. I wonder how it got here. It must of fell of some fink it might have been of a bigger rock then this. There might be some fink in this meteorite. It might be a alien. It crashed landed on square block at 4.00 in the morning it woke everyone up …
When I was on my way to my grans in the car I saw a shining thing on my right. It flew over my car its an x-trail. When it landed I went to see what it was and it was an ASTEROID! I called everyone I could. It landed on a hairdressers shop called Utopia rapidly. When the people I called came I shouted THE ASTEROID IS HERE!!! The asteroid was about to blow up and guess what, it did.
Right in the place it blew up at shop.
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